I have nothing to say except that in a small room if the walls and floor are wood it wood look like a log cabin.
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As it turned out Jack had been gathering food. So they ate and then where off again. Jack had given Mist a ‘home’ command and Mist had trotted away. Apparently heading for New York.
"So Taylor, where were you kidnapped from? Maybe I could help you find your way back." Jack offered as they sat for a noon rest.
"When I was kidnapped I was sharing a cabin outside Anchorage, Alaska with a family of nine… What?" Jack had frozen and was now looking at him with fear popping like popcorn in his eyes.
"I am not taking you there or even showing you where it is. Do something good for yourself and NEVER go back there. They only board families there so just go back to your real home. Where is that?"
"Wait. First tell me why I should never go back there."
"… Fine. You should never go there because they work for this company. I don't know the name but let me tell you from experience that this company is bad news. They work with genetic stuff. The building you where in was just a holding area out of who knows how many. You see, now they test on animals and people. Don’t get involved in their trap. If I find out you did you’ll go strait to the gravvve.” Jack’s gaze focused on something behind them as he dropped the subject. Taylor looked and found a fat squirrel sitting on a tree stump. Something whizzed past his head and hit the squirrel in the eye, splattering blood everywhere. He turned and saw Jack holding a pistol. Where’d he get that? His messenger bag? Then why hadn’t he used it on Bill and Andrew? “Hitting them in the eye makes sure you don’t have to puncture the skin.” Jack said as he stood and picked up lunch (the squirrel).

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I'll post again in a few days ... maybe ... hopefully ... probably not ...
P.S. this spell check doesn't know how to spell 'hadn't' can you believe that!?!

sorry i have not posted in a while but i had this pinball game on here and it made it so i had to get on on a different computer and delete it ... i hated it anyway because it would show a ton of adds before you could play the game. so that's gone and i guess all is well.

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Taylor woke to silence. He looked around in panic. Where was Jack? Had he abandoned Taylor and left him to die? He stood breathless. Wait… That was the sound of footsteps! Was it Jack, Bill, Andrew, or a wild beast that had came to eat him for breakfast!?! The sound stopped. Then there was a screech and a giant brown cat that looked like a lion without a mane leapt out of the shadows at him. He screamed and ran down the tunnel. Running blind, and screaming like a banshee Taylor ran into something that grabbed him by the shoulders. Taylor struggled and looked up to see dark blue eyes glowing through the heavy darkness at him.
"Oh! Whoa! Hey! Dude stop! It's me. Dude it me Jack… OK? You good? Now tell me. What happened!?!"
"I-I-I w-w-woke up and y-y-you were g-g-gone. T-t-then a-a-a giant b-b-brown CAT came after me!"
"Mist," he growled under his breath.
"Who?" Taylor asked
"Tell yeah later. Lets go." Taylor started walking then Jack grabbed his shoulders again and softly said: "This way," turning him around.
It took a lot longer to get back to fall opening than it seemed to run from it. Taylor was thinking about what Jack had said and how his eyes glowed in the dark. What did he mean by 'Mist'? Who was 'Mist' anyway, and why where Jack's eyes glowing? He saw light up ahead. Then he and Jack where out of the shadows and looking at the cat that yawned and thumped it's tail on the rock floor with out standing from it's lazy laying position.
Taylor looked at Jack and was shocked to see Jack's expression. Jack was looking PROUDLY at the cat! He went over and knelt down by it and started PETTING it!?! What the heck was going on here!?!
"Why you ol' rascal. I thought I left you back at New York." Jack said proudly. "Yeah, Mist, you my boy. You take after your mother." There wasn't just a hint of sadness but his voice was also filled with pain. "You thought Taylor here was an intruder so he was lunch, didn't you. Well, he's not. K?" The cat NODDED YES! "Good. OK bub go say sorry like you should have already." 'Mist' came up to him then put his front paws on Taylor's shoulders and licked his face with a HUGE slobbery pink tongue.
"Dude you are truly the weirdest person in the world." Taylor said wiping the spit and slobber off his face, smiling.
"Trust me. You do not know the half of it. So Taylor looks like you just meet Mist the mountain lion,” said Jack trying not to go into another laughing fit.

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I'm righting ch 6 but I'm a bit stuck on ideas so maybe you could comment and give we something to work with.

here you go
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Taylor woke to silence. He looked around in panic. Where was Jack? Had he abandoned Taylor and left him to die? He stood breathless. Wait… That was the sound of footsteps! Was it Jack, Bill, Andrew, or a wild beast that had came to eat him for breakfast!?! The sound stopped. Then there was a screech and a giant brown cat that looked like a lion without a mane leapt out of the shadows at him. He screamed and ran down the tunnel. Running blind, and screaming like a banshee Taylor ran into something that grabbed him by the shoulders. Taylor struggled and looked up to see deep clear ocean blue eyes glowing through the heavy darkness at him.
"Oh! Whoa! Hey! Dude stop! It's me. Dude it me Jack… Ok? You good? Now tell me. What happened!?!"
"I-I-I w-w-woke up and y-y-you were g-g-gone. T-t-then a-a-a giant b-b-brown CAT came after me!"
"Mist," he growled under his breath.
"Who?" Taylor asked
"Tell yeah later. Lets go." Taylor started walking then Jack grabbed his shoulders again and softly said: "This way," turning him around.
It took a lot longer to get back to fall opening than it seemed to run from it. Taylor was thinking about what Jack had said and how his eyes glowed in the dark. What did he mean by 'Mist'? Who was 'Mist' anyway, and why where Jack's eyes glowing? He saw light up ahead. Then he and Jack where out of the shadows and looking at the cat that yawned and thumped it's tail on the rock floor with out standing from it's lazy laying position.
Taylor looked at Jack and was shocked to see Jack's expression. Jack was looking PROUDLY at the cat! He went over and knelt down by it and started PETTING it!?! What the heck was going on here!?!
"Why you ol' rascal. I thought I left you back at New York." Jack said proudly. "Yeah, Mist, you my boy. You take after your mother." There wasn't just a hint of sadness but his voice was also filled with pain. "You thought Taylor here was an intruder so he was lunch, didn't you. Well, he's not. K?" The cat NODDED YES! "Good. Ok bub go say sorry like you should have already." 'Mist' came up to him then put his front paws on Taylor's shoulders and licked his face with a HUGE slobbery pink tongue.
"Dude you are truly the weirdest person in the world." Taylor said wiping the spit and slobber off his face, smiling.
"Trust me. You do not know the half of it. So Taylor looks like you just meet Mist the mountain lion,” said Jack trying not to go into another laughing fit.

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a thing that i do, idk why, is that i put the last paragraph of the last chapter at the begining of the next chapter.
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Motor Speed
ch. 2
Taylor had a harder time putting his life into the hands of Mother Nature. He stood on the edge looking down. Then turned and saw his own shock reflected in Bill and Andrew's faces. The guys recovered their shock and leaped at Taylor making him stumble over the edge after Jack.
Taylor felt the air making his eyes water as the first of the fall started. He prayed to God that if this was the end that he please make it quick and painless. Then he felt a jarring force as he suddenly stopped falling. He looked down to see that he was only half way down the fall. Then all of a sudden he was pulled back through the fall. As he was roughly dumped on the ground he looked to see Jack standing next to him in the dark cave that they were in.
"Remind me never to do that with somebody as heavy as you ever again." Jack said rubbing his shoulder and smiling. He turned and looked down the tunnel that seemed to go on forever in never ending darkness. Pulling a flashlight out of his messenger bag he looked at Taylor in concern. "You ok? You look a bit frazzled." Taylor's jaw dropped. He had been kidnapped, met Jack, the weirdest kid in the world, been chased after by maniacs, fallen off a waterfall/almost DIED, and Jack thought he looked A BIT FRAZZLED! What did this guy do for a living? Jump off cliffs and live in the woods?
"Dude, what is up with you!?! I just about died out there and you think I look a bit frazzled! Do you even have a plan to get us out of here? Cause I'll tell you some thing I am NOT going back out in to that waterfall! And you know what else-” Taylor froze. He had finally had enough sense to look and see how Jack was taking it.
"Well, well, well. Looks like I picked myself up a mr. smarty pants." Jack growled looking irritable, but with a strangely calm voice for the way his eyes were glowing with their amber anger. "You really think I don't know a way out of here don’t you? I can't believe this. If there was really no way out of here then why would I chose this spot to get rid of those goofs. I know a way out buuut," he said as he walked over to the fall and dropped their only flashlight into it. “If your gonna act that way then I'll just leave you here. I can find my way out of here blind. But you on the other hand don't know nothin'. So what now mr. smarty pants!" Then he went and sat down across from Taylor.
Taylor stood fran-dazzled by what Jack had just done. He was shocked to put it simply. Now what was he going to do? Taylor almost speechless finally got the courage to say: "I'm sorry, Jack. I've just been under a lot of stress lately" Jack looked him over like he did the first time they met.
"It's okay, dude. We'll sleep here tonight.” He said gruffly after a while.
"Okay." Taylor said quietly with a hint of tiredness in his voice.

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so ya. ... I have this soup it's like 'White Garden' or something and, again idk why, it reminds me of Motor Speed. It's weird.